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Post by Westrmistr on Jul 28, 2009 10:18:36 GMT -5
#1: You guys should put it somewhere that you are part of the team. Makes it easier to distinguish who's who.
#2 It should happen half way through the story, be close the ocean, be far away from any other Enigma related story, and be in an otherwise small, insignificant place.
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zhormster
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Post by zhormster on Jul 29, 2009 4:38:03 GMT -5
Nobody ever told me that I'm part of the team Guess I'm not needed anymore Half way through the game, huh...okay, give me a few days and I'll have something for you =D
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Post by Tator on Jul 29, 2009 11:09:08 GMT -5
Nobody ever told me that I'm part of the team Guess I'm not needed anymore Half way through the game, huh...okay, give me a few days and I'll have something for you =D
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Post by Tatortotts2 on Jul 29, 2009 11:34:43 GMT -5
Nobody ever told me that I'm part of the team Guess I'm not needed anymore Half way through the game, huh...okay, give me a few days and I'll have something for you =D Lol you aren't. Don't worry He was talking about me -Tator (For some reason I can't log in to my account on my cellphone )
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zhormster
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Post by zhormster on Jul 31, 2009 13:59:22 GMT -5
Okay, here it goes...
After the 4th Gym (or anything else in the middle of the game), you hear a strange voice in your head. ["Young Trainer, we need your help! Get to the lake/sea/whatever [inser lake/sea/whatever name here], before time runs out! You are our only hope!"] You decide to go there, what else would a super cool hero like you do, huh? Well, once you get there, you notice something strange in the water...there's an area that is darker, and it seems that you could dive there (or maybe there is a hole that takes you Underwater, I don't know what you were planning to do). You go Underwater and -WHOOSH!- you're in a city, Underwater. There are also some of the bad guys, and a strange thing that looks like a laser. Right behind the laser stands a guy who looks like a scientist (if it is okay, please name him Zhorm and let him say LAZAH instead of laser). One of the Underwater people takes you away from them and explains the situation to you, and why the elder called you. ["You see, these guys came here and started to talk about "The legend", and they asked something like "Where is the legend?", "What do you know?", and if we didn't tell them anything they just hurt us. We really don't know what they are talking about, and we don't have anything to fight these guys! Please, you must help us, or else this whole city will be destroyed! They want to use that laser to search for whatever they want! Stop them, please!"] After that, you'll have to battle all of them (I think about 9 of them should be enough...oh, and don't forget the crazy scientist with an obsession for lasers ^-^). After you beat them, they will leave, but the laser still fires a shot and destroys a huge rock. Just after the bad guys are gone, a secret hidden entrance to a cave appears, the elder talks to you, explaining that they were looking for [insert legends name here] to use its powers to take over the region, and that rumors say it's living in that cave (but it doesn't, really, it's just a cave). And after that, everything in this city is done...for now.
Tell me if that is what you were thinking about, and if not, what should be changed ^^' See ya
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Tatortotts
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Post by Tatortotts on Aug 2, 2009 19:31:55 GMT -5
Okay, here it goes... After the 4th Gym (or anything else in the middle of the game), you hear a strange voice in your head. ["Young Trainer, we need your help! Get to the lake/sea/whatever [inser lake/sea/whatever name here], before time runs out! You are our only hope!"] You decide to go there, what else would a super cool hero like you do, huh? Well, once you get there, you notice something strange in the water...there's an area that is darker, and it seems that you could dive there (or maybe there is a hole that takes you Underwater, I don't know what you were planning to do). You go Underwater and -WHOOSH!- you're in a city, Underwater. There are also some of the bad guys, and a strange thing that looks like a laser. Right behind the laser stands a guy who looks like a scientist (if it is okay, please name him Zhorm and let him say LAZAH instead of laser). One of the Underwater people takes you away from them and explains the situation to you, and why the elder called you. ["You see, these guys came here and started to talk about "The legend", and they asked something like "Where is the legend?", "What do you know?", and if we didn't tell them anything they just hurt us. We really don't know what they are talking about, and we don't have anything to fight these guys! Please, you must help us, or else this whole city will be destroyed! They want to use that laser to search for whatever they want! Stop them, please!"] After that, you'll have to battle all of them (I think about 9 of them should be enough...oh, and don't forget the crazy scientist with an obsession for lasers ^-^). After you beat them, they will leave, but the laser still fires a shot and destroys a huge rock. Just after the bad guys are gone, a secret hidden entrance to a cave appears, the elder talks to you, explaining that they were looking for [insert legends name here] to use its powers to take over the region, and that rumors say it's living in that cave (but it doesn't, really, it's just a cave). And after that, everything in this city is done...for now. Tell me if that is what you were thinking about, and if not, what should be changed ^^' See ya Erm... You aren't on the team, right? Lol. -Tator
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zhormster
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Post by zhormster on Aug 3, 2009 7:03:40 GMT -5
I don't care, I just want to say something >_<
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areiv
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Post by areiv on Jan 30, 2010 22:59:04 GMT -5
I don't think you need a bubble around you, because your sprite doesn't really change when you go underwater in the official games. The city could have some giant air bubble around it or something, maybe? And there's some pipe that goes up into the air that's the entrance/exit? ('cause if there's a gym there, people would have to be able to get there, right? Assuming there IS a gym there.) ...and, um, haven't they already taken over the region?
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