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Post by MegaMaccer on Jul 27, 2009 15:55:40 GMT -5
Ok guys, here's the current story, step by step. It doesn't include what the characters say, mostly because I'm lazy -Player wakes up in his room -Player goes downstairs -Mum offers Player breakfast -Aid runs into the house, saying that Player is needed -Screen flashes to Lab -Player and Rival stand in front of Aid, who explains the situation -Player and Rival receive Pokemon -Player and Rival leave Lab, in search of Prof. Maple -They find him cornered by a Pokemon on Maple Path -The Pokemon leaves -Player's long lost Dad comes down from the top of the screen -Enigma officials enter from the side of the screen -Player and Rival battle Enigma's -After defeating them, the screen flashes to Maples bedroom -Long text session explaining some basic history of Torzach, including what it was that cornered Maple -Player leaves for Cherry town -While in Mior Canyon, an event involving Bounty hunters happens -Player is taken into an underground Ranger base -Another text session explaining some different things -Player receives Pokedex with the intent of gathering data for his Father, the head Ranger -Player reaches Cherry town While there is a lot more than this, this should give you a basic idea of whats happening, and help you story guys develop some more things off that. I hope its not too confusing
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Post by Lyzo on Jul 27, 2009 17:28:02 GMT -5
Mac, are you sure you want to release most of the things about the game, Sprites, Story, Maps... ? It'll be less of a surprise then...
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Post by .:Ivanna:. on Jul 27, 2009 17:49:45 GMT -5
Well, I suggested he put it here. =P While its true it'll be less of a surprise, we need all the help we can get as this game develops into maybe more of a community project. Maybe we should all discuss this or have a poll or something. ><
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Tatortotts
The Torzach Supporter
Torzach Story-Planner
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Post by Tatortotts on Jul 27, 2009 18:29:49 GMT -5
Whoo. Time to think of events/etc. for this stuff -Tator
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Post by Westrmistr on Jul 27, 2009 19:19:07 GMT -5
Hm... Just looking into the future, but wouldn't we cause some feelings to be hurt if people suggest things, and aren't used? I may just be pointing out the negative points of this, but I think we should keep everything past Cherry town a secret. Plus it'll be more fun for people to play the game because they won't know what's going to happen. I feel the same way about spoiling a story. Anyway, there are my two cents...
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zhormster
The Torzachian
I like clouds o_o
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Post by zhormster on Jul 28, 2009 1:07:07 GMT -5
Sounds good so far, finally something that I can use to think about story stuff =D Is it just because of the massive wall of text that it seems that the hero gets his PD a bit late in the game?
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Post by Lyzo on Jul 31, 2009 15:20:13 GMT -5
Sounds good so far, finally something that I can use to think about story stuff =D Is it just because of the massive wall of text that it seems that the hero gets his PD a bit late in the game? Nah, it's the long wall of text... it isn't that far off while playing
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Post by MegaMaccer on Aug 1, 2009 15:51:19 GMT -5
Wow, talk about a delayed reply from me... Well, I sort of agree with everyone here. Thing is though, people want to build on the story. So, they need to see the story. And we do want it to be a surprise, so we won't be telling everything. Basically everything I've written here is already known by everyone, so no issues there. And Zhormster, it does look like he gets it late, but its important he gets it when he does
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zhormster
The Torzachian
I like clouds o_o
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Post by zhormster on Aug 2, 2009 2:18:19 GMT -5
Yeah yeah, I understand...but do we really have to know something aout Torzach so early in the game? I'd like to have the PD before I know anything about the region =/ Just my opinion ^^
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donveco
The New Guy
I know you want me!
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Post by donveco on Aug 23, 2009 16:49:49 GMT -5
so...whats the use of this threat? Do we get to make suggestions for the story line? Maybe think of some side quest? Just wondering, because that would be cool And also, you don't hvae to spoil anything. Just dont tell us which idea you are going to use, or maybe just PM the user that thought of it, and then it would still be a secret to most of us. ^^
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