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Jul 25, 2009 14:00:18 GMT -5
Post by .:Ivanna:. on Jul 25, 2009 14:00:18 GMT -5
I made these a while back, so they might need some clean up. They're the sprites I joined the team with in fact: Comments? Edits? Suggestions? Karma?
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zhormster
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Jul 25, 2009 14:18:27 GMT -5
Post by zhormster on Jul 25, 2009 14:18:27 GMT -5
I think the head on the right one is a bit too big, and the smoke for the left one doesn't really look that good, but that's just my opinion...and names? If you don't have any names yet, maybe Flambert and Flamerl? That's how i call all of my fire starters xD
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Jul 25, 2009 14:47:47 GMT -5
Post by .:Ivanna:. on Jul 25, 2009 14:47:47 GMT -5
Yeah. You're right about all those things. xD I do like that guy's big head though. Do you think you could edit them a little, West? xD
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Tatortotts
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Jul 25, 2009 23:47:39 GMT -5
Post by Tatortotts on Jul 25, 2009 23:47:39 GMT -5
Levarion just came to me the moment I saw the bigger one. Maybe if they're evos you could call the small one "Levtar" or something like that. -Tator (PS: I figured you were partly asking what to call them, considering the thread is called "Names?" )
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Jul 26, 2009 0:29:09 GMT -5
Post by .:Ivanna:. on Jul 26, 2009 0:29:09 GMT -5
Critique's good too. xD
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Tatortotts
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Jul 26, 2009 0:31:39 GMT -5
Post by Tatortotts on Jul 26, 2009 0:31:39 GMT -5
Lol. Well, I agree with zhorm. The smoke doesn't seem all too right. Unless it had a different back, such as Torkoal's. (Not the shell, just the little craters or whatever)
-Tator
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Jul 26, 2009 3:50:40 GMT -5
Post by Amtrax on Jul 26, 2009 3:50:40 GMT -5
i like them, although the arm placement on ethe first one is a little odd, the way it is if it were to face straight ahead one arm would be on the very front while the other would be off to the side. That's just my opinion though. anyway, for the left one how about Heataur and Embling for the right one?
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zhormster
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Jul 26, 2009 4:01:08 GMT -5
Post by zhormster on Jul 26, 2009 4:01:08 GMT -5
hm... Left: Flazaur Right: Embzaur Maybe?
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Vrai
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Jul 26, 2009 9:43:35 GMT -5
Post by Vrai on Jul 26, 2009 9:43:35 GMT -5
I really, really like the one on the left. The smoke looks alright, but I don't know if it really fits in with him. :x
I like all of the one on the right too, except for the head.. it seems a bit.. awkward? Maybe it's the placement, or just the size, or maybe both, but it doesn't feel like it fits in with the rest of the body.
Names? Names names names.. how about something along the lines of Ignikid, Ignitrex? I dunno.. ;P
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Jul 26, 2009 10:51:34 GMT -5
Post by Westrmistr on Jul 26, 2009 10:51:34 GMT -5
I made these a while back, so they might need some clean up. They're the sprites I joined the team with in fact: Comments? Edits? Suggestions? Karma? I like them, but the sprites could use some work. The smoke needs to be more... I dunno... to the left or right on the evolution. Then the little one, there's just something off. Can't put my finger on it. Names? Uh, names... how about Embersaur and Magmarex?
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Jul 26, 2009 12:11:27 GMT -5
Post by .:Ivanna:. on Jul 26, 2009 12:11:27 GMT -5
I made these a while back, so they might need some clean up. They're the sprites I joined the team with in fact: Comments? Edits? Suggestions? Karma? I like them, but the sprites could use some work. The smoke needs to be more... I dunno... to the left or right on the evolution. Then the little one, there's just something off. Can't put my finger on it. Names? Uh, names... how about Embersaur and Magmarex? Could you -cough- play around with it? XD
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Jul 26, 2009 17:37:23 GMT -5
Post by Westrmistr on Jul 26, 2009 17:37:23 GMT -5
Alright, I have edited it.
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Aug 3, 2009 12:24:13 GMT -5
Post by lizardman974 on Aug 3, 2009 12:24:13 GMT -5
The right arm (our left) of the bigger one looks like it's coming out of its stomach. I understand that it looks better when the arms are close together and short, so I think you can fix it by just angling the arm a little bit.
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Aug 3, 2009 13:11:48 GMT -5
Post by .:Ivanna:. on Aug 3, 2009 13:11:48 GMT -5
They actually are kinda like that. xD Im pretty sure that in the concept, the arms just kinda come out like that.
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