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Post by Tatortotts on Aug 4, 2009 19:15:38 GMT -5
So I decided I might try to sprite something. I couldn't figure out how to make the border "good" so I went with all black, hoping one of you could edit it a bit. There's 14 colors used, and all of them are provided with the sprite. It was based off of Scraps' Torkindle. (A Torkoal pre-evolution) - Concept Art - - My Sprite - I know it's not the best, but it's my first one, and to be honest, I really loved doing it. Tell me what you guys think, and if maybe I should continue trying to make more Also, if someone could edit the border, I know that would make it look a tad better. Thanks -Tator - Last Version(s) so Far -
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Post by Westrmistr on Aug 4, 2009 19:24:19 GMT -5
Awesome job, Tator! I can't edit it for ya right now, because I have to leave, but here's some advice. You can make a darker shade of yellow than the dark shade, and use that for some of the outlining on the head, and feet. Nice job.
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Post by Tatortotts on Aug 4, 2009 20:14:42 GMT -5
I revamped it a little bit. Edited the eyes, neck, and tried my luck at the border (which still sucks, by the way ;D ) Any more criticism/help/editing would be wonderful -Tator
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Post by lizardman974 on Aug 4, 2009 20:23:36 GMT -5
The legs are a little mis-shapen, which causes it to look, for lack of a better word, un-pokemonish.
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Post by .:Ivanna:. on Aug 4, 2009 21:39:20 GMT -5
I revamped it a little bit. Edited the eyes, neck, and tried my luck at the border (which still sucks, by the way ;D ) Any more criticism/help/editing would be wonderful -Tator It reminds me a bit too much of shuckle. c: Maybe it should be more orangish with its eyes closed.
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Post by Tatortotts on Aug 4, 2009 21:40:59 GMT -5
I revamped it a little bit. Edited the eyes, neck, and tried my luck at the border (which still sucks, by the way ;D ) Any more criticism/help/editing would be wonderful -Tator It reminds me a bit too much of shuckle. c: Maybe it should be more orangish with its eyes closed. Hmm... I'll try that. PS: You should get on MSN -Tator
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Post by Tatortotts on Aug 4, 2009 22:19:55 GMT -5
Sorry for double post, but here they are. I recolored him of basically everything except the rocks on his back. There's one with his eye closed (Torkoal style) and with his eye open (Torkindle style) - Eye Closed - I was thinking about taking the ring out from under his eye, but that's what Torkoal's is like. Then again, this isn't Torkoal, just his pre-evo - Eye Open - I like this one better I think. I think his eye should be open, because Torkoal is more of an older version, and older people tend to squint, so this one is younger and more upbeat and happy. Let me know what you think. -Tator
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Post by Westrmistr on Aug 5, 2009 11:15:41 GMT -5
Remember Tator, you can't double post. I say it looks pretty good. I would have to dive in and edit myself to scope out any big problems. I like the one with its eyes open, by the way. I might go and edit it for you sometime.
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Post by .:Ivanna:. on Aug 5, 2009 21:20:58 GMT -5
Nah, it could still use something else. I don't like it very much. The feet still bug me, the outlining bugs me, the shading could be better. And I dislike the eyes. However, this is wonderful for your first sprite,
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Post by Tatortotts on Aug 5, 2009 22:15:17 GMT -5
I lol'd xD Apparently I start small -Tator
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Post by Westrmistr on Aug 6, 2009 8:45:03 GMT -5
I think it's a brilliant first try. Here, I have edited. I added the sixteenth color, I fixed up the outline a little, I edited the shading slightly, and I edited the eye. The little guy just needed some editing.
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Post by .:Ivanna:. on Aug 7, 2009 10:31:33 GMT -5
I think it's a brilliant first try. Here, I have edited. I added the sixteenth color, I fixed up the outline a little, I edited the shading slightly, and I edited the eye. The little guy just needed some editing. Nah, its feet still bug me. =/
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Post by lizardman974 on Aug 7, 2009 11:53:41 GMT -5
I edited it a little bit.
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Post by Tatortotts on Aug 7, 2009 13:29:42 GMT -5
I edited it a little bit. Eh.. That doesn't really look right imho. -Tator
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Post by lizardman974 on Aug 7, 2009 15:15:16 GMT -5
It might be the fact that the legs don't have as much black, that the legs aren't pointed anymore (personally, I think it look better this way), or that the editing software I used made the colors lighter.
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